The Meladoy
A Poem by
Daniel Gardner
Something Knew I wanted to try at work. Written in song form.
Verse 1 This is a song Made to increase your dreams Fulfill fantasies Bringing only pure ecstasy This breath taking smooth delight Is to help you fight Chorus X2 This is what no one else can do This song is meant for you This melody is for me This is to do what we do Fight! Verse 2 You really think this is interesting But Your friends think we are absurd Although there is no denying That the sonic boom of our hearts can be heard Chorus X2 This is what no one else can do This song is meant for you This melody is for me This is to do what we do Fight! Verse 3 Believe me when I say Our love is a strange thing Full of pain And melodic door bell rings But I wouldn't change it for anything Chorus x3 This is what no one else can do This song is meant for you This melody is from me to you This is to do what we do Fight for love!
© 2010 Daniel Gardner
Author's Note
Be nice this is my first time attempting lyrics. Just thought of it at work and wrote it out. Comment, Review, Rate.
Reviews
This was very nicely written. I liked the flow of the song. It was very great. I could hear music in the background as I read this. Thanks for sharing. :)
Posted 15 Years Ago
That’s a good song …..
I can hear it ringing in my ears...
Loved it…..
Posted 15 Years Ago
That’s a good song …..
I can hear it ringing in my ears...
Loved it…..
I struggle with lyrics. I believe you did very well. I like the flow and the story in the words. We must fight for love or lose it. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote
Posted 15 Years Ago
I struggle with lyrics. I believe you did very well. I like the flow and the story in the words. We must fight for love or lose it. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote
I like the message within this song love, you should post it as a song lol Be great to hear :)
I get the feeling of serious power chords in this!
xx
Posted 15 Years Ago
I like the message within this song love, you should post it as a song lol Be great to hear :)
I get the feeling of serious power chords in this!
xx
Pretty good song
Posted 15 Years Ago
Pretty good song
I had it till 'sonic boom' The only words that threw me. Otherwise it reads very well.
Posted 15 Years Ago
I had it till 'sonic boom' The only words that threw me. Otherwise it reads very well.
Interesting and different
Posted 15 Years Ago
Interesting and different
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Added on September 13, 2010
Last Updated on September 13, 2010
Author
Daniel Gardner Monroe, GA
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I'm an inspiring writer that has a million and ten thoughts running through his head all day. I joined this site because my wife inspired me to. I was not prepared for the thoughts to jump out so much..
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