Stretched

Tanka

Staring at success

I stretch as far as I can

longing to touch it

and bring it back home with me

to prove I'm more than you thought 

Reviews

[pal]

Short and sweet. Well expressed thoughts
Pal

[Unspoken poet]

This is such a wonderful write here, i enjoyed this

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Love the words! Nice write!

[Inject Positivity]

Brilliant message!!! Beautifully penned tanka....It is thought provoking....Well done dear frnd....Full ratings!!!!

[Dani California]

Thank you Dhiman! :)

[Inject Positivity]

Awww!!! Thank you, not too many people comments with my name....This is so sweet of you.....