Granddauter's Light

Granddauter's Light

A Poem by Dan
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Haiku

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Granddaughter, my light

She fills my heart to the brim

Grandfather's heart soars

© 2010 Dan


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Now this is a perfect Haiku. Couldn't have done better myself. Great Haiku!

Posted 15 Years Ago
Good haiku, but remember haikus do not rhyme.

Posted 15 Years Ago
I know the feeling. I only see my one grandchild, a girl, about once a year. I hope you see yours everyday.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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 Added on April 22, 2010
Last Updated on April 22, 2010

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Dan
Dan

Clarksburg, WV



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I'm here to read, but might try my hand at writing. I have one granddaughter and I'm wrapped around her little finger tightly. more..