The Last Thread.

The Last Thread.

A Poem by Randall

                                 The Last Thread.


               I'm beginning to think. Why the hell do I stay?

            I'm living by a thread, with little reason to hold on.
    
         Sometimes I think I'll just cut that last thread and let go.

      Free falling to wherever the wind takes me.
  
    But then I remember I promised you, I would stay.

 And a Promise must always be kept.



D. Randall Dollaway
2025

© 2025 Randall


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Hi Randall's
Promises become fate but the will of your heart to keep promise that itself made your promise become true . Fate is already written....

So don't be afraid . God makes the way to give you strength to walk further to make promise true


Jessy Jacob ❤️
Thank you.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This poem feels like a quiet breath held between despair and devotion. The image of that single trembling thread is so delicate, yet the promise at the end glows with a soft, steady strength. There’s a tender beauty in the way you balance the ache of letting go with the warmth of loyalty.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Hi Randall's
Promises become fate but the will of your heart to keep promise that itself made your promise become true . Fate is already written....

So don't be afraid . God makes the way to give you strength to walk further to make promise true


Jessy Jacob ❤️
Thank you.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 15, 2025
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Randall

Chicago, IL