Second Letter to Mary

This poem is the second Letter To Mary from Daniel. From a Novel I wrote, "Mary and Daniel."

My Dearest Mary,

Love should be complete.

Love should never be in between.

Love should be committed.

When I said, I love you.

You can look at my words as the truth.

Love has only beginnings, never ends.

When I first saw you, I thought, this woman is the reason love exists.

Then I spoke with you. I heard absolute, Angels singing love songs.

I've never been in love in between, never will.

When I said, I love you. It will be an absolute committal.

My love for you will have only beginnings, never ends.

Place my love in your heart, my sweet Mary.

Your Daniel

Reviews

[Curly Grace]

This letter feels like a quiet lantern of devotion, every line warm, steady, and full of a love that knows its own truth. The way Daniel speaks of beginnings without end gives the piece a soft, timeless radiance. It reads like a vow wrapped in light, tender and unwavering.

[Randall]

Thank you, Sarah, ~~~~~. And to think he was just sixteen when he wrote this.
Randall...

P.S. Actually, I wrote this in May 2025, but Daniel felt it when he was sixteen.

[Curly Grace]

Wish I knew a Daniel when I was sixteen... my heart would have fluttered off after receiving such a love note.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice letter...you really know how to spin yarns about love.

[Randall]

Thank you, Kenneth. Love is always a nice place to visit. Quite often, one stays if they are loved in return.

Randall...

[JessyJacob]

Hi Randall's
A very sweet letter. It inspired me to say below:
A love touches it stays ever..
I see it as love is touching through as it was with beginnings so old and continues..
My love for him is beyond touch, and at the feet of few, it's not that we are slaves to them it's only our fate that they touch their feet at our forehead.. How we are made victims. One who gave us so much of his meat I mean his money time and love ..but still desire of unending makes them endlessly nostalgic.

I see love starts with infatuation age .. but our love started when we are matured.
Love exceeds it becomes divine and when it becomes divine then you have limits on your negativity and never it hurts any.
If people claim we are bad and like dark stories, it's whose fault ? For you to say so.. is it that you lost war and trying darker sides . Is it you are weak can't live without dark. When you have accepted you to be dark. Atleast you didn't have kindness there too...
So it's not love neither dark you are trying to claim so.. it's your lost control on mind that works endlessly without sleep only to become winner...if you really want to win then you shouldn't have competitors... Try to be fair in thoughts and in life nobody is competing with you..

Jessy Jacob ❤️