Suddenly

-Suddenly-

If you think my love for you was conceived.

It wasn't.

It just happened one moment.

Upon meeting you.

No warning, no bells or whistles.

Nothing, just a feeling that came suddenly.

Reviews

[Amy R]

This is exactly what love does to us all "No warning, no bells or whistles." It just happens.
Nice write with plenty meaning.
~Amy

[Randall]

Thank you, Amy R. You are right, nothing forced is so much better and will last longer. Thanks for the email on Simple Meeting. You gave me a lot to work with, I'll have to step up my Game over the next few days. The Brownstones that you suggested would be in the Near Northside, just above the Loop, a good choice, old money.
Randall...

[Amy R]

Oh lovely. I did a little research not much . Glad it worked out nicely
You're welcome!! 😊

[red93]

Nice Work again Randall - 'brevity is the soul of wit'. This Piece has the feel of an extended Tanka, and you control the process well. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Randall]

Thank you, red93. I had to look Tanka up. I knew of a Haiku style. Thanks for the knowledge. I'll have to try it again, following the rule of Tanka,5-7-5-7-7
Randall...

[red93]

No probs Randall glad to be of service. And don't worry too much about the strict syllables - the Japanese themselves don't recognise these Westernised distinctions ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Curly Grace]

I love how you make it sound accidental, like love just tripped over itself and landed in your lap. Cute trick....and it works.

[Randall]

Thank you, Sarah. Sometimes love can be so simple as to how it comes about. Randall...