I Knew

I knew I had to have you the first time I saw you. 

Even if it meant my demise. 

I'm caught in your web unable to move, not wanting too. 

I surrender, have your fill.

Reviews

[Curly Grace]

Your poem moves like a quiet pulse,
a feeling that rises slowly
and settles with the lightest touch.

There’s a tenderness in your surrender-
so gentle it feels almost weightless,
as if the heart simply opened
without needing to be asked.

These lines drift through me
like a soft exhale,
leaving only a trace of warmth
where the ache used to be.

[Amy R]

What a vulnerable write.. we often sacrifice so much and then it ends.
~Amy

[Randall]

Thank you, Amy. Love is supposed to be vulnerable, to be happiest as well as in pain. But love is also resilient, and can over come any thing in its path.

Randall...

[Amy R]

Definitely, its the most powerful force in the universe.. YOU'RE WELCOME🙂

[Chris]

I think many men have been in the same situation/position. Comes a time each of us has to make (and live with) our decisions...