"Another day"

I'm not quite sure if I can make it........another day?

I see you from afar... can I make it ......another day?

I try hard to stay away... can I make it......another day?

I do believe your heart misses me... can I make it... another day?

Another day has arrived... I have made it!

 

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

I liked this poem, as it has so many questions that could be interpreted in so many different situations....

In this one, it's about love from afar...but I feel it could be used in other ways too....

The last line made me smile.....

Cheers...

BB73

[Randall]

Thank you, Buddhistboy. You hit it right, it is about love from afar. "Another day has arrived... I have made it!" But what about the next day and the one after that? Some place, there is a straight path to where he needs to go. He needs to find it.

[JessyJacob]

Hi

For some it's life and death for few they see only money.. but i see a day spent 24 hrs not knowing death can come which direction.
I just see still at this time a fast to break in this ramadaan they dropped missiles one after other 1234567, sounds hitting earth 🌎 such a brutal and cunning act they didn't even made them to eat. I see these actions will be taken into consideration a similar act of world war 2 where people were killed in gas chamber in Europe .

I know for few atleast i am gone but my family is safe with money.


Jessy Jacob ❤️

[red93]

You are a true Romantic R, and to be admired for it. I only feel this way about Paydays these days 😁 Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Randall]

Thank you, Red. I always like hearing from you. Romantic, I smile at that. You know, there is always a sunny day out there somewhere, you just have to look for it. Paydays are always sunny days.

Randall...

[red93]

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[Fabian G. Franklin]

As the late, great, Tom Petty wrote, "The waiting is the hardest part". Every day is a new chance to become a new creation. But waiting in the cocoon, does the worm know he will emerge with wings? I wonder if we humans give it more than a passing thought. Maybe we should. I enjoyed the read. F.

[Randall]

Fabian, Worms that turn into butterflies are wonderful. But some worms never achieve wings. But they have five hearts. Whereas humans have but one, perhaps we need to give thought to how we use that one gift from God.

Randall...

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I'm certain God will guide those who ask. But some are too proud or stubborn to ask. "I will instruct you and teach you the way you should go; I will give you counsel and watch over you. Do not be like the horse or mule, which have no understanding; they must be controlled with bit and bridle to make them come to you." Psalm 32:9