"If I were to..."

If I were to die today.

I know you would miss me.

How long?

Maybe a year or two, then fading away

But if you believed my love for you was true.

Perhaps, you would miss me to your end.

I am happy that I will not see your end.

I could not bear it.

Your end would be my end.

Reviews

[Gee]

Fingers crossed I will be taken before my wife of 33 years.
Good writing Randall

[Randall]

Gee, thank you. I hope you don't leave us anytime soon! I'll say I think you'll still be kicking the ball around come seventy years from now. That should put you well over one hundred. The one thing I can be certain of is that you will feel the same even then as you do now.

Randall...

[red93]

Great stuff R, keep the Romances coming, it is Spring again and we should all be in love. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Randall]

Red, thank you. I'll keep trying, you're right after all, " it is Spring again."

Thank you for your visit from Bristol!

Randall...

[Amy R]

Brilliant ending, exactly what a powerful love/bond feels like.
I love writing about twinflames and your ending here is what it feels like.. such devotion with slight sorrow, more love again I am seeing..

NICE POEM
~Amy

[Randall]

Again, Amy, thank you. I don't think anyone wants to be the last one picked for a team, the last one in line, or the last one left alone.

Randall...

[Amy R]

You're welcome.

[Curly Grace]

There’s a hush in this piece, Randall...
a soft imagining of endings that feels more like devotion than sorrow.
Your lines move like a hand reaching through time,
measuring love by the echo it leaves...
I felt the quiet ache of it, and the tenderness beneath.

[Randall]

Thank you, Curly Grace. Yes, it usually is a case of devotion rather than sorrow for the first one to leave the party.......

Randall...