Why I've fallen for you. You leave me confused, like the village idiot walking in circles with a smile on his face. You wonder why it's always a circle with a smile.... Because it always leads me back to you...... I'm not the smartest man, but I love walking in circles back to you!
Oh what a poem,
I enjoyed this, very playful but meaningful.
"...but I love walking in circles back to you!" Definitely portrays love, something about circles make sense when it comes to love...
Thanks for sharing,
~Amy
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
Thank you, Amy. Good to hear from you! The nice thing about circles is that you can always expand th.. read moreThank you, Amy. Good to hear from you! The nice thing about circles is that you can always expand them to wherever they need to go. Thanks, Amy, I'm coming over your way to read. Okay....
Very true and it can't be broken, so love is quite stronger like this.. no new works yet, Feb was a .. read moreVery true and it can't be broken, so love is quite stronger like this.. no new works yet, Feb was a horrible month... YOU'RE WELCOME
1 Month Ago
Amy, please get to writing. Your fans and reviewers are waiting.
By the way, that is a reques.. read moreAmy, please get to writing. Your fans and reviewers are waiting.
By the way, that is a request, not an order.
It has plenty of cheerfulness to it. Soulful and playful its own little way.
I admire the creativity that has gone into this. A splendid read!
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
Thank you, Rosie. I am glad you think it is creativity that has gone into this writing. When it is t.. read moreThank you, Rosie. I am glad you think it is creativity that has gone into this writing. When it is the truth, and I'm lucky enough to write it down.
Thanks again for the review.
Randall...
Criminology: you.
Retired LEO: me
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1 Month Ago
Thanks for getting back to me with your surprising response.