"I think I'll just go home"

I think I'll just go home, I am tired, really, I am.

It seems like it's no use trying anymore.

I've tried enough already.

For some reason, it just doesn't seem to matter.

It seems to be, never enough.

But I tried, and that might be all that matters.

Yes? 

I think I'll just go home and rest.

And see if tomorrow comes.

If it doesn't show up.

Well, I guess I won't be tired anymore.

But if it does show.

I will be rested, ready to try again.

All I really need is a moments rest.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Hi Randall
What are you trying for??? A relationship? A friend? a job? whatever it is, makes you tired and unsuccessful...
perhaps a bit of rest can re-new your spirit .... giving up is not an option...so keep on trying and you shall find!!!
Warmly, B

[Randall]

Hi, Betty. Thank you for your question filled review. They most certainly apply to this writing. And the advice given is most true. One must never give up, just rest up for the next go around.

Randall...

[Betty Hermelee]

My pleasure
Warmly, B