"Cherries" 'Haiku'

cherries drop to ground

the sun heats them to softness

giving the birds food.

Author's Note

Haiku 5-7-5

Reviews

[Amy R]

I enjoyed this haiku, I use to write this a lot, been on pause, maybe I need to start back.
I like the way it challenges us with few words to make sense of this writing style.
Thanks for sharing.
~Amy

[Randall]

Thank you, Amy. Yes, please do write Haikus. I would like to read them!
You are right, they make you think much deeper, showing feelings, raw emotions, perhaps a more direct look at life.
Thanks again, Amy.
A pen and paper are the best gifts one can give to oneself. What we put upon the paper is up to us!

Randall...

[Chris Shaw]

A lovely visual nature scene captured in 5/7/5. Portraying our avian friends which pleases me. Nicely penned Randall.

Chris

[Randall]

Thank you, Chris. I'm going to try this Haiku and Tanka style. I'll see what I can do with it. I like trying new ways of writing. Birds are so important to us, especially to our Ecological system. We must keep our system in balance. It would be a buggy world if we lost our birds.

Randall...

[red93]

Excellent R - give it a few months and you'll be writing Haiku in yr sleep 😁 Always nice to see a trad 5-7-5 on a familiar Subject. I enjoyed this ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Randall]

Red, thank you. It's sort of fun, makes you search for the right words. No fluff added! Although I find myself counting syllables on my fingers like a first grader. :)))

Randall...

[red93]

Soon they will be coming out of the ether at you R - they have a Haiku Generator in Tokyo 😁