"a leap of faith, to far."

"a leap of faith, to far."

A Poem by Randall




hell, sometimes you can leap too far.
landing in front of the gates of hell.
the devil certainly has a smile on his face today.
guess he's glad to see me! 
maybe he remembers the last time we met,
and i spit in his eye!
he thinks he's got me this time.
i'll smile at him, and spit in his other eye.
then take another leap of faith,
landing somewhere between the fiery 
gates of hell and the pearly gates of heaven.
perhaps, closer to you, just not in your land.
 

© 2026 Randall


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This reads like a call to arms...spitting in the devil's eye....even though it was "a leap to far"....

You gotta try in this life, or what's the point right...?

Good, emotive write here fella....

Catch the devil off guard and celebrate life....

This is an invigorating read...

BB73

Posted 9 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Randall

1 Hour Ago

Thanks, BB73. You are right, one can't be afraid of anything. Always forward...
Always a leap.. read more



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Gee
Aye, fortune favours the brave no matter what the situation.
"If ya don't try you'll die regretting"
Good morning

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Randall

5 Minutes Ago

Good morning, Gee. You are absolutely right, "If ya don't try you'll die regretting." :))) Hope the .. read more
This reads like a call to arms...spitting in the devil's eye....even though it was "a leap to far"....

You gotta try in this life, or what's the point right...?

Good, emotive write here fella....

Catch the devil off guard and celebrate life....

This is an invigorating read...

BB73

Posted 9 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Randall

1 Hour Ago

Thanks, BB73. You are right, one can't be afraid of anything. Always forward...
Always a leap.. read more

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Allouez, WI