" a choice my dear"

" a choice my dear"

A Poem by Randall

I will not dress this one up!
I will simply tell you,
I love you! 

Don't be foolish.... and toss me aside.
Because I will disappear,
never to be found,
again!

Unless you come to... 
Where I am.

And once finding me there.
You may find... you also love me.

© 2026 Randall


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So much directness here, the poet knows what he wants. His compass is set and I hope the “dear” has both her eyes and compass set on him too. That first stanza is like signage in neon lights. There is strength and directness in the word choice. Brevity with impact Randall. I rarely look at posted images, the words hold the power.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Randall

5 Days Ago

Chris, thank you for your fine review.

'Tis true, one's words can change the balance .. read more



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Fabulous R, another Piece about Romance. So glad you are going to be reading some Betjeman - I am sure he will inspire yr Romantic leanings to even greater heights. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Randall

3 Days Ago

Thank you, Red.
You are right, it is hard to find his books over here, maybe I'll have to com.. read more
This one carries a sharp little ache, Randall. Thank you for sharing it.

♪ ♫ 🎵 🎶" As the shades of night grow deep
When the morning stars grow dim
They will find us in the shadows fast asleep" ♪ ♫ 🎵 🎶

Posted 5 Days Ago


So much directness here, the poet knows what he wants. His compass is set and I hope the “dear” has both her eyes and compass set on him too. That first stanza is like signage in neon lights. There is strength and directness in the word choice. Brevity with impact Randall. I rarely look at posted images, the words hold the power.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Randall

5 Days Ago

Chris, thank you for your fine review.

'Tis true, one's words can change the balance .. read more

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Added on May 18, 2026
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Normandy, France