"my heart is a mess"

I am plume wore out.

My heart is a mess.

I'm in love with you.

And... I am so tired.

I think... I'll take a walk.

Maybe to the moon.

If I don't come back... soon.

It's because... I am taking a nap.

On the bright side of the moon.

Look for me... you will see me....

I am the man on the Moon.

https://youtu.be/H3aJhUYt8D4?si=v-ww9gTjUj9pfVUc

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Your first line gave me the image of a dying flame. A strong opening line to describe a hopeless situation and the emotions that come with it. I liked the mention of the man on the moon, I reckon he can see everything and would understand. Just a few of my own thoughts Randall. Have a wonderful Sunday.

[red93]

Is this the Poem that triggered it all R ? And it is so nice - a whimsical musing and rumination with a pleasant ending. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️