Bottle and Heart

I stare down the broken neck
of glass bottle, and just like
your heart there’s nothing
no more to give.
Both a crack away from
breaking to pieces, but
I still hope there’s
something to gain.

Reviews

[Who Cares]

Imagery is great and your words flow together nicely. I also like the metaphor you used, the glass bottle was pretty unique.

[hmm]

Love the imagery in this;
such a powerful read & quite profound.
So nicely done!