Dark wind

Inspired by the Japanese death poems, warriors and samurai.

Once the sun shone upon my land;

land full of valleys and hills,

land full of hope.

Now, that hope is gone;

taken by mysterious dark wind,

wind full of anger and hate.

Oh great wind, I accept my death!

Let the cold wind take my soul;

to my sacred home.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

IInd phrase`s full of insights. The last one has many diversions for "love" but still dispersing the shades in the sky. Nice imagery.

[MomzillaNC]

An angry read of abandoning oneself to fate…

I have an edit in line one, though: "Once the sun [shone] upon my land;"

[Danny]

Thanks for the review! :)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

An inspired and inspiring poem. Bravo, sir...:)................

[Danny]

Thank you! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome....:).......