The Music of the Moor

What Love...What Love
...Is this?
That could never
Be expressed
In a single word
Or all the stars
In a Universe...
Unbound
And yet to be delivered
So precisely in a sound
In the music of the moor
In the sweet haunting whine
Of a Soul entwined
...In yours

~DannyLynne~

Reviews

[DearSweetAgony]

Wow, this write is awesome! As Kailer Mason said it "Of a soul entwined in yours" that line was SUPERB in every way possible! Keep up the great work!

[Kaylor Mason]

This is poetry in love like tears in a gentle rainfall. "Of a soul entwined in yours" that's exquisite!

[DannyLynne Riley]

This piece was actually inspired by a song Rob Pattinsons "Let Me Sign) from the "Twilight" movie I couldmt figure out how to upload it or it would have been an accompaniment to this piece. I aspire to call myself a writer and I am in love with words so its quite significant and hard to admit that sometimes there are "no words" that there are experiences that could never be summed up on a word...and where words would fall short a sound explodes...a guitar rift..or the heart-melting whine of a violin...even the wailing of a voice (Im often reminded of tj as Pattisons song offers up...most of the words are inaudible its the raw feeling of despair, hope sacrifice, joy and overwhelming love..all wrapped up and crammed tightly against each other in a sound "in the sweet haunting whine...of a soul entwined..in yours" ~DannyLynne~

[Kyle]

You are indeed a poet. I like the meanings here. This one made me think.

[Crow]

I love the eerie boundless expression, beauty found in light and dark.

Uplifting, in the depths of my soul.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

graceful~ this loving, smooth and haunting poem is sooo graceful~ dear lady =)~