Child of the Night

One who is in tune with the familiar darkness

Midnight approaches, the Moon makes an appearance
She arises, hears the callings of the night
She takes comfort in the dark
Its jet black atmosphere entices her
Offering her comfort and security
The mystery inside glows as bright as the silky moon
Different, she is, this child of the night
She looks to the stars and finds herself
She is the deep dark universe
And it is her

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

I have no suggestions. Don't change a thing.

You have a nice touch. I appreciate that.

It's nice and compact, economized.... you have style.

I usually like to say something negative.

so.... f**k you.


("....atmosphere entices her..." that's very lovely)

[Daphnee]

You, sir, made my day. Thank you!

[Surya]

Much to see and much to play...entire darkness, she is..
I enjoyed your write..:)

[Amber]

This one is soo cool, I love how deep your poems are, and how easy they are to read! I think i love this one so much because I love t stay up all night to just stare at the moon and stars from the safety of my bedroom window. Very amazing fantastic wonderful poem. I will love reading more like this.