Willie's Song

When the clouds get cloudy tonight
Will the stars shine on the sky so bright.
I wish I was running in paradise.
Where the flowers grow tall,
in the brink of the waterfall.

Where I am the leaves crumble and die
Let me be with the birds in the sky.
Where music play for everyone to hear
Smiling and laughing without any fear
I wish I was running in paradise.

Reviews

[Greg Skura]

Paradise is what we make it! i really enjoyed your poem thank you for sharing!!!

[emz]

This is a beautiful poem, the images it evokes are truly lovely... i loved it.



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[shadadakiya]

paradise is a place were we should all long to be very beautiful write.

[Chiquita]

I would like to visit this paradise as well. Life crumbles where I am. I will be strong enough and move on. Paradise is a place for the tomorrows. The todays are here for now.

I enjoyed this look toward the future of paradise. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you ever so much for the review of my story "Redemption Draweth Nigh". I appreciate your thoughts and your kind words.