The Hole

Depression poem

Reviews

[Christopher Tait]

Makes me think of all the things I did as a teenager and all the things I wish I'd done but can't now that I'm a so-called adult. Deep and moving imagery. Very good stuff.

[Dan Bradley]

Heavy. Thinking too deeply about pop culture is scary ain't it?? well done. .
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[O]

Teenage Wastelaaaaaaand!

"unsual" "tradgedy" I'm not sure if you meant these to be like this or not.

Lovely work!

[Steven Kowal]

This was damn ambitious! I don't even know where to begin....

[Melanie S. Pronia]

Incredibly deep! The first four stanzas were a b***h choppy, but after that the entire poem flows like a masterpiece!

[Hedra Helix]

Damn too. I love stanzas 1,2,3,4,5, and 8 , beautiful!

[Hawksmoor]

Damn. Beautiful and eerie. I loved this poem a hellova lot. Sad and real and honest are a few words that came to me after i'd finished reading it. "Its THAT kind of hole
Where instead of a place that indents into emptiness
there is no solid ground to compare
fall in and you can't tell when you fell." This is so deep that reading it could bring anyone who knows what this is like to tears. or at least it'd bring them a thoughtful pause.
Whoa. Keep writing poetry. This site needs things like this. Damn.


Hawksmoor...From The Bleed.