just... me...

the feelings that get to me

This numbness is all the same

My life right now feels like a game

As everyone I love goes out like a flame

It's like there only me and no one else to blame

Once again I sit and cry

Under the deep yet cloudless sky

Because no matter how hard I try

Everyone I love still says goodbye

Scares and ink scatter my skin

Any second and the anxiety will kick in

If I think of them my head will spin

No matter how hard I try I'll never win

Reviews

[Em]

I am always here for you, you know that. I will never say goodbye. What I love about this poem which honestly I keep reading, is the constant rhyming in each stanza. I love how you write keep it up.

[emipoemi]

"it's like *there's only me.....blame"
*Scars (not "scares", unless that's an australianism).

This is when all is said and done a genuine gem. Well done!

[Kailani]

This is awesome, you captured such a dark feeling perfectly.

[DarkArtz 0703]

thank you very much for your review

[Matthew Kult]

tragically dejected

Great Read

Matthew

[DarkArtz 0703]

thank you for your kind review

[KCthelastboyscout]

This is a topic not just relatable to you but to me and others who read this as well.when people you love say goodbye a piece of you leaves with them.the hole inside of you doesn't grow back and it can not be replaced

[DarkArtz 0703]

yeah... I've lost a lot of my heart this year

[Lykos]

This a brilliant description of loss. People come and leave your life like walking through a rotating door. Excellent poem!!

[DarkArtz 0703]

yeah once again I was crying when I wrote that

[Lykos]

Strong feelings definitely make people add more depth to their poems. You included. From the heart to the page, the words flow.

[DarkArtz 0703]

thank you very much A.

[AcasualPawn]

Amazing read........
This numbness is all the same
My life right now feels like a game.
Wkth no controls in my hand..
So of course,
No matter how hard I try I'll never win

[DarkArtz 0703]

thank you very much

[King Spark]

I love this it really brings out your emotion a lot

[DarkArtz 0703]

it's completely true sometimes.... but I know there is somebody that cares

[King Spark]

Aww, I get like that a lot especially at times and I don't want to... and yeah there is ❤

[DarkArtz 0703]

thank you again