wow

A Poem by DarkArtz 0703

f**k life

cant breath

cant think

and yet

I still sink

every inch of me

is in pain

every inch of you

all in vain

I just want to go

and you cant accept

the fact that

i'm over you

© 2017 DarkArtz 0703

Author's Note

I don't know just dabbling with words

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emipoemi

"can't *breathe"

so poignant....so powerful.....what a way to say "Back off!" the last line having no rhyme gives the whole sentiment that extra punch Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana B.

I'd say it's a lovely dabbling with words :) there is a lot to read between the lines, well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

thank you very much for your kind review

8 Years Ago

you're welcome :)

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Added on September 5, 2017
Last Updated on September 5, 2017

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DarkArtz 0703

Australia

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people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. Mother of two boys one in heaven and the other with me more..