madly

from the heart ... a.j I love you

I've found my song

a simple little tune

He makes me feel like I belong

and I know we'll be together soon

until now I didn't truly understand

why I craved he so badly even just the touch of his hand

I'm in-love with him

he's always stuck in my head

I always win

remembering the words he said

his smile drives me crazy

he's so mean but he treats me like a lady

my meanie

my king

my love

my world

Author's Note

my baby this is for you

Reviews

[poetgurl]

A very sweet write,
nicely written

[Jay]

awwwwwwwwwwww its so cute I wanna die
not in a bad way though

[DarkArtz 0703]

thank you so very much

[Davidgeo]

Reminds me of something violently stabbed into the ground, something sharp and spear like... the last stanza was very poignant, "your world". No offense but, you kinda sound like a dick. Loved the poem though.

[DarkArtz 0703]

none taken and thank you

[KCthelastboyscout]

Whoever inspired you to write this will never find another like you.you are once in a lifetime.truly madly deeply

[DarkArtz 0703]

yes he truly has inspired me

[King Spark]

Awwww gosh, i love this baby, together we're a perfect melody, our hearts beat as one as they sing the same song, hehe you've really melted my heart with this

[DarkArtz 0703]

good I love you so much

[King Spark]

I love you so much too baby

[DarkArtz 0703]

forever and always

[King Spark]

Always and forever baby, no matter what

[DarkArtz 0703]

I know baby... I know all to well

[King Spark]

I really miss you so much babe

[DarkArtz 0703]

I really miss you too

[King Spark]

I know baby, this distance is hard, but one day we wont have this distance hehe

[Matthew Kult]

Cute and cuddly. The ever romantic expression in poetic beauty. A lucky fellow to say the least.

Always and with Love

Jayden D.

[DarkArtz 0703]

king Spark is the lucky fellow and thank you for your kind review
K.

[Matthew Kult]

You are most welcome