my voices said

it's harder then you think

to be the way I am

around people I shrink

alone I don't give a damn

ugh why am I like this

pain to me is eternal bliss

I see so many people smile

and its actually real

I haven't been able to in quite a while

nobody seems to give a f**k about how I feel

i'd like to say im fine through the night

because when I dream god im up so high

wont sell my thoughts at all

and I wont talk too long

when I talk I seem to fall

why can't I ever stay strong

I run to get away

but im stuck with what they say

Author's Note

rough draft

Reviews

[Neville]

.. although it might be very hard to ignore them, just don't believe them .. rough drafts can be so misleading .. Neville

[DarkArtz 0703]

I stopped believing them long ago thank you

[Neville]

.. my absolute pleasure .. take care .. Neville

[Serendipity Planet]

Still
very good
I love it , going shring with people is something I knew well

[WritersBlock]

I like the font a lot. Its kind of hard to see which only makes you look deeper.

Sounds like how it feels to deal with social anxiety.

[Jack O]

Very raw. True feeling. I tend to hide such in metaphor or silly analogy. This is out there for all to read and understand. I personally think it needs an edit. But that is your job. Not mine.
Good read.