Forever

A tasteful kiss
forever mine
I am wrapped
within the depth of
his caged soul

Drops of passion
drip from my
mortal lips
ecstasy enticing
to the touch as we
entwine as one

Sweet nectar
over flowing within
the blood red moon
dew drops of sinful play
he forever

Beckons my heart away

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Love the final four lines so seductive and asn playful as they can be interpreted many ways. This is an incredibly beautiful piece to love especially the wrapped within the depth of his caged soul, love it. keep em' coming

[Tina Kline]

I like this a lot. Perfectly dark and romantically tempting. Your word choice and imagery are excellent.

[Chris Taylor]

I agree with the others, I love the last line as well. It flows very nice and has decent imagery. A good write. Keep it up!!

[Lily Mae]

Forever beckons my heart away... mmm I like that thought lol.. Another wonderful write.. keep them coming..xx

[Larry Dyson]

taste ful kiss ..sweet nectar to the taste..dew drops of sinful play...he has been busy calling your heart away .. nez pais?

[Raven Starhawk]

There is a dynasty of majestic substance here in the exotic flavor of your writing. It caresses my senses with superior style

[These Haunted Hallways]

Wow, a very cool piece here :) Great imagery, and deep feelings expressed lively here. Like a vampire night or somethin, hehe. Great job!!

M.

[Tainted Devotion]

A very sensual and deeply moving peice. I loved this very much. There's a pain in this poem, and a tinge of saddness there, but it was still deeply romantic in it's own way. Loved your word choices and how you expressed these deep emotions in this piece. Very well done.

[Jibey]

Intense with passionate feelings.. 'wrapped' in his 'caged soul' - a striking image...'ecstasy enticing...entwine..' nice... and 'dew drops of sinful play... Darkly delightful... The writing is hot with painful desire...

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Sad yet wonderfully expressed.