Signals Across the Pond (company)

different cities

and streets

one long walk

different eyes 

and voices

one great longing

different plans

and failures

one life’s work

different stages

and bonds

one intact memory

under different phases

and skies

different lives

trying to hold it all in one place

is like having a tight grip on flowing water

trying to let go

is like being submerged to the chin

different exertions

and surrenders

one thing missing (     )

sending busy signals across the pond 

to disconnected lines-

still listening

Reviews

[A.G.]

Damn, this is beautiful.. filled with so much emotion. You mentioned a longing, a disconnection- unsaid words in one your lines,
different eyes
different voices
one great longing
i believe we all long for a connection. Waiting to be understood; to feel something. i loved it. Thank you for sharing..
-Angelina

[NoPoetry]

I agree, I think we all do. I appreciate the kind and
thoughtful feedback :)

[A.G.]

No problem (:

[NoPoetry]

reading it here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lDtVrr1grEM