So Go Ahead...

This is basically a quick write about heartbreak that I started a good while ago and got finished today....so, maybe not so quick in the end, haha.

Heart ache,
Heart break.
I fucked up,
Made a mistake.

So go ahead...

Rip it to pieces,
Tear it apart.
Finish it now,
Since you're at the start.

So go ahead...

Kill it now,
Hack it in two.
Stand back and we'll see,
What you can f*****g do.

So go ahead...

Lock away the memories,
Throw away the key.
Seems you and me,
Just weren't meant to be.

So go ahead...

Go ahead.

Go ahead.

End it.

Author's Note

All feedback is greatly appreciated, thank you! :D

Reviews

[Firefly]

There's a beautiful flow to your words, they feel very fluid and move with eachother excellently :) it's a beautiful poem Mayo, be proud :3

[DarkRainbowPie]

Thanks 'Dublin', means a lot x')

[Rachael]

Amazing! I could totally feel your anger towards whoever. I muzt say your poem kicked butt. :)

[DarkRainbowPie]

Haha, thanks very much :')

[Chris Dominguez]

very powerful and a lot of anger. In a way i kind of wished there was more anger involved i mean he ripped your heart out! the beginning started off nice though. Great work :)

[DarkRainbowPie]

Thank you very much :) Might try to add a little more rage then, haha x'D

[Chris Dominguez]

lol that is always the best way to express everything.

[DarkRainbowPie]

Indeed. x''D