THE BEGINNING.

Just a simple poem about Love <3

THE BEGINNING

 

 

Today is the beginning of an everlasting love

One that will last through eternity

That will never perish

A love so powerful

That will fight through all hardships

Its strenght will carry us through

all doubts and obstacles

And to their dismay

We’ll be together forever

Even if we only have each other

                  after all, there is no need for any other.

Author's Note

This is just something that spilled out of my mind, it's certainly not the best, but I hope you enjoy it.

Reviews

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

i enjoy the first and last line. it was bold and moving. a bold piece. we are our harshest critics :o)

[dante alexius]

Today is the beginning of an everlasting love


One that will last through eternity


That will never perish


A love so powerful


That will fight through all hardships

Its strength will carry us through

all doubts and obstacles

And to their dismay

We'll be together forever

Even if we only have each other

after all, there is no need for any other.


i think that this is an interesting first post! :]