A Force of Evil

Poem about a girl destroyed by a force of evil.

She lay there in a pool of blood

Caused by her own misery

Her skin soaked in it

Turning her fair skin muddy

Her body ever so still

 So lifeless.

 

There was evidence of a beautiful girl.

That was once youthful, alive, and full of personality

 

But she was overcome by a dark force

That blasted all the life away out of her fragile body.

As she dropped to the ground

The blood spilled everywhere

Encircling her body.

Her corpse just lay there absorbing the terror.

 

 

Author's Note

there might be some syntax issues, but i think that the idea of it still comes across easily.
i dont know why i wrote this... it just came to me...
suggestions welcome :)

Reviews

[Legion]

Very dark. I loved the last line...."Her corpse just lay there absorbing the terror."...very chilling.