All full.

My stomach is full of pills
My lungs full of pot

My mouth is full of silver
My hands are soaked in sin

My body is full of indecision
But my brain...

My brain is full of ideas

Reviews

[snoochee_boochee]

Simply straight to the point. Kudos.

[Warren Daniel II]

A very short and sweet poem, I always start by saying I am not the best at deciphering poems and their deep meanings, but I always try me best.

I feel as if the person being described in the poem is very young, and is highly medicated supported by "My stomach is full of pills" and "My lungs full of pot" strengthening the idea of the person not being in a "normal" state of mind, but at the end the person states his brain is full of ideas telling us that the individual knows exactly what's happening.

[Warren Daniel II]

A very short and sweet poem, I always start by saying I am not the best at deciphering poems and their deep meanings, but I always try me best.

I feel as if the person being described in the poem is very young, and is highly medicated supported by "My stomach is full of pills" and "My lungs full of pot" strengthening the idea of the person not being in a "normal" state of mind, but at the end the person states his brain is full of ideas telling us that the individual knows exactly what's happening.

[ANTO]

My, my, my (Im not quoting you - thats the way I talk DM)
- but my, oh my, each line here is a firestarter - your full brain is filling ours - kind of like brain-donation (which many here would say Im in dire need of anyway)

I liked the format too - it gives time to digest the words/ create the images

A successful deployment of brain stuff to page/screen I feel. Well done!