Pissed Off

Pissed off

The change comes unrepentantly

The anger I feel unsettling

The things they have said carelessly

Kindles the fire to life

The doubts I had are lingering

The rage I feel is encouraging

The pain I once felt is numbing me

And it helps me breath again

The things I have said maliciously

The hurt I have caused intentionally

My control is slipping dangerously

And I am standing on the edge

I feel the hate surrounding me

The rage inside is smoldering

The flames have consumed everything

And I makes me feel alive

I fear this may be unstoppable

My hate is now uncontrollable

The pain I am feeling unbearable

Will this consume my soul

My anger is now overwhelming me

My rage has grown tremendously

The flames will burn unceasingly

This fire inside is alive

Author's Note

Also old

Reviews

[Author Unknown]

Never seen anger or upset expressed in elaborate way. Its good you've penned it down . Blow that steam off than bottled in and repressed .

[the dude]

That 'fire inside' - the 'dark side', shows up when you need it - embrace it and feel it. It'll protect your bright-side when the fit hits the shan - and you 'have to', but no longer can. Love it.

[Darkgirl]

What you just said right there completely describes how I feel about this emotion. I need it to blanket me when I am hurt. Thank you

[the dude]

read 'all in harmony' - my description of your 'fire'. It is best if rapped to a 'linkin park-style' beat - ;)
the 'fire' reveals both its power and its fleeting charisma as the 'snakes are let out' and the mind balances itself in peace.

[Darkgirl]

I will, i find it mildly amusing that you say that as "Affliction" of mine is best when done to Linkin Park song, and i can't remember the name of the song off the top of my head right now.

[Rose Diamond]

This poem has very accurately described a scary emotion we all feel sometimes, and it does it with great word choice, smooth flow, and great power. Good job!

[Lyn Anderson]

This is well constructed, and thought out - I love the use of the font to convey the message more forcefully. Nice write.

[Darkgirl]

Thank you so much :)

[katnisscat]

This is really good! it has really good rhythm and the vocabulary fit together perfectly. I think it might be a little more than pissed off though. I love it!

[Darkgirl]

Thank you so much!!! I want feedback so badly and the only people to ever read this stuff is my family and close friends and we all know they can't be trusted :)

[katnisscat]

Yeah, I know what you mean. You should continue writing it is really good!