Diva

Her beauty emitted from Heaven

From a girl to a Goddess she rose

Gossips tainted her with a sin

Her core drained, she faded

forever forgotten and gone with a wind

Reviews

[B]

A rose remains a rose
And some may try to destroy it
but the essence is in the bud

beautiful poem

[Satoshi IroTzu]

I`m glad that you enjoyed the poem. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A complete tale in so few words. You did well. Create a perfect Goddess destroyed by naysayers and liars. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Much appreciated.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Bear]

Very beautifully worded, and sad the moral but a strong one, gossip can kill, but I am not sure I get the title. You might consider a different title as Dive doesn't fit. I give your poem 4 out of 5 Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Satoshi IroTzu]

"Diva" as in an exalted female with all the beauty and glamour. Like ... Whitney Houston.

[Bear]

I understand that and can see what you mean, It's just not the impression your poem gave me :~)