The Girl Out At Sea

Drowning and drowning with no one ever noticing

The girl out at sea
Shes slowly going under
Her screams are a silent plea
Is anyone out there to save her?
She will wonder

The water is cold
Numbing her dying body
It has a strong hold
Its not afraid of any body
She yells
Nobody hears
Blood she smells
As death nears
As it quiets down
Somebody hears her cries for help

As she continues to drown
If only somebody would realize
That girl out at sea

That is me.

Reviews

[??????]

This is a great insight about people who are never there in a time of need.

[Max64]

DP - really great work. I very much "enjoyed" this poem. Dark, but wonderfully evocative.

[Dark Poet]

Thank you so much!

[Wall Hermitt]

Another poem that captivates my attention. Remarkable and very profound. This is extraordinary work.

[Jack Kennedy]

Wow dark poem that speaks volumes to the reader when they read it! Great work that second verse is epic

[Dark Poet]

thanks so much!

[Jack Kennedy]

You're very welcome