Love Won't Find Me

In stories told at night
meant to keep the monsters far away
they tell of a girl and a brave knight
Now it's simply child's play

love wasn't meant to be broken
As you begin to cry
Wasn't it supposed to be full of passion and devotion?
Your heart begins to die

A book once hopeful to the mind
Only choking everything inside
Faith was supposed to be blind
You will forever be denied

Your voice begins to fade
Silent in your confused state
The walls are a strong blockade
If only someone would open the gate

Author's Note

I have been fearing i won't be loved lately so i had to write it. It's not my strongest poem.

Reviews

[Gabby Nieves]

I think we all have a fear of not being loved and being alone and it really f*****g sucks. And its kind of funny how these stories paint an image in our mind of what love should be like and from my experience it isnt like that at all. But I guess I'm kind of thinking negatively right now lol sorry . But you say this isnt your strongest poem, and idk cause i haven't read them all yet. But I think it's amazing, really relatable and just a nice flow. Sorry for the paragraph lol , anyways keep it up

[Dark Poet]

Your definitly right:) thanks you for the review!

[??????]

Keys come within time:) never to be denied in fate:)

[willweb]

This poem touched me tonight. I felt something dark inside that was hollow and void of light, but somehow I emerged unscathed. This was deep and thought creating. I enjoyed reading this tonight.

[Dark Poet]

Im very glad:) thanks you

[The Quill]

yeah is it having fear in it..but as a poem it is having nice flow and nice use of words..a beautiful poem in sad tone