Beauty In The Broken

You cry for me at night
Pleading for some help
Supposedly I make everything alright
So I beg you with my all my words

The blood and tears I'll fix
Stop falling through my fingers
Just listen to my lips
Only kind words will I mutter

There is Beauty In The Broken
So let me tell you what I see
You are a book, ripped and open
A story I would like to read

I promised you are loved
Even if it's only me
I won't allow you to be pushed or shoved
Give me your heart and you will see

Author's Note

I have a friend who is extremely suicidal. Every night I convince him to keep living late into the night. So, i decided to write about it.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

we are Beautifully broken to God in our brokenness.


Such beautiful piece very powerful and shows
much love and loving someone in their brokenness
in saying that our scares are beautiful and they're.


Share this with your friend and sadly having those
suicidal Tendency's isn't from God I hope he is well
I lost 2 family Members to taking their lives Great grandpa
when I was 16teen and a cousin in law he was 22 was Oct. 2013
I believe it is very hard pain to heal from he will be in my prayers.


Thank you for sharing such a beautiful yet
sad piece this made me cry but that is a good thing BRAVO!


Blessings. Benita

[Dark Poet]

Yes I know it isn't God's fault:) thank you for your kind words!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. :)

[??????]

Smiles yes there is beauty in the brokenness:) I love this one:)

[Wórdsmíth]

Nice verse of the piece:-

"There is Beauty In The Broken
So let me tell you what I see
You are a book, ripped and open
A story I would like to read"

Quiet deep. Painful. Memorable. Full of emotions at all. Nice imagery.

[Danielle Anatomyy]

If you haven't shown this poem to your friend, I'd highly recommend it. I can tell this piece means a great deal to you; it's very powerful. I agree the words you used bare hope, even in the situation you're faced with, which is sad. I almost feel like I'm experiencing your pain, with the description you used. It's very good.

[Dark Poet]

Thanks you very much

[Simon Welsh]

I know how you feel. You convey your feelings well.

[MomzillaNC]

It's so sad and so hopeful at the same time. It's so hard to keep pulling someone with you toward daybreak all on your own. Make sure you hold tight to his hand, but take hold of the hand of someone to help you up. There is a path through, with a human chain of understanding, patience, and care. I hope you're able to bring him far enough into the light to get the help he needs.

[Dark Poet]

Thank you very much:) i hope i can too

[MomzillaNC]

I'll offer up a prayer for him, and for you.