A Sickness I Desire

Write your pain on my arms
Weave it through the bone
Settle in my rushing veins
So that we may become one

Whisper softly in my ear
Let your sickness sink into my skin
You're grasp will break my wrist
I won't let you go through this alone

You're hands are so cold
Please, keep them in mine
Let me warm you deep to the soul
You are in my thoughts anyway

Tell me all of your nightmares
Stop hiding everything you are
It's your mind I find enthralling
A universe exploding

Come close I dare
Trust me with your secrets
I will only handle you with care
It's you I desperatly crave

Author's Note

This isn't one of my stronger poems, oops

Reviews

[Jackson H. Harley]

You say this isn't one of your stronger poems, but I must disagree, I read this multiple times, each time getting a different feeling or thought pattern, although I'm sure his has an intended meaning, your words could potentially hold different meanings for different readers, which makes this very interesting, though I could be wrong :p nevertheless, great piece :)

[Dark Poet]

Thank you very much. I really appreciate it:)

[Jackson H. Harley]

The pleasure is mine :)

[yvo miki]

oh yes it is I think its ur best .I will tell u my problms bc I feel safe around u

[Dark Poet]

Awe I only wish people to feel that way with me

[yvo miki]

awwww I do

[Briana O'Connor]

I love the imagery you carve here. Such a strong emotion. Beautifully penned.

[Baby Ricochet]

Definitely brought to mind a heroin addict