Our World

Life couldn't taste sweeter than this
Gazing at these stars we call ours
Inside a world we've created to become one
Learning how to love the mental and physical scars
Laying in this meadow,
Hand laced into yours
Melting from the heat of your finger tips
Carefully knocking down my doors
Blue eyes...blue eyes...
If love is just a drug keep me under
Let's make this ocean deeper
I'm going to disappear into the heat of your summer
I long for the morning,
When we face this world together
And we just keep falling
Whispering our love as if it were fragile
We'll thank these stars every night that we're here
How did they know?
Love me like you love your garden
You and I will forever grow

Author's Note

For You (You know who you are).

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviews

[Porter]

A wonderful piece of emotion for who I'm sure was delighted to read it. You seem to have quite a grasp on seeing a relationship blossom in a sense and shape itself into a world only you and someone else know. A world within a seemingly normal world. Beautifully written. ~Never Forget

[Dark Poet]

Thank you! I appreciate what you said

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I'm going to disappear into the heat of your summer
Laying in this meadow,
Love me like you love your garden


Opps I think I am losing myself into your world of imagination. Great Work!

[Dark Poet]

It's always a compliment for someone to get lost in it!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Absolutely! Thanks for sharing the "Our World" :)

[PoeticSorcery]

good heartfelt poem with nice intentions behind it.

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

A sweet poem that does well to show that one can not stand alone. When true lovers come together will forget any sorry and enjoy what the nature have to offer. Well crafted, Miss?

[Dark Poet]

Thank you for the review!

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That was very beautiful:)

[Rob Santana]

Well written. filled with passion and emotion.

[Dajena]

Your sentiments are clear and powerful.

[DoormanDan]

Love is most definitely a "love"ly sensations(eh? eh?....I'll walk out the door now lol). I know I haven't reviewed anything of yours in a long time, but all I can say is that your writing is as strong as I remember it being. Your choice of wording and flow are distinctive amongst your writing, and this poem is no different.

"I'm going to disappear into the heat of your summer." That is a wonderful line that demonstrates the quality of your writing, and is easily my favorite line in this piece. You have impressed once again, Dark Poet! :)

[Dark Poet]

Haha I actually laughed. And thank you very much. I Always enjoy your reviews. Thanks again Dan:)

[Arthur Henn]

Your Title... Our world caused me to read this one. Wonderful written prose. Beautiful!

[Dark Poet]

Thank you very much! Im glad you were interested in reading it

[Insight "MH"]

This poem tastes sweeter than honey! That was so amazing, thank you for giving us the privilege to read this wonderful piece of awesomeness.


Insight.

[Cecile Wonder]

This is a wonderful piece of writing. Keep up the good work!

[Dark Poet]

Thank you!

[Cecile Wonder]

you are welcome