Nature

I came up with this after a walk through the park.

Nature's sunlight warms my back,

I tell you now that this is a fact.

 

Her song heals my wounds

As I listen to her tunes.

 

She surrounds me with her love so much,

That I laugh at her touch.

 

She lifts me into the air

So high that I could see the birds, deer, and bear.

 

Now I must go,

But don't you know?

 

I will be here tomorrow,

So don't let me see your sorrow.

Reviews

[Alveron]

simple but beautiful
short and sweet

[Silent_Whispers]

Very simple but really nice. I like it!

[WindSong]

I love reading and writing poems about nature. Your poem is very light and whimsical. Keep on penning!

WindSong

[ToxicMelody]

The rhyming is cute and all but it sounds sort of elementary. I think you can do better with this poem if you re-do it. It's not bad, no not bad at all. But it definitely isn't your best. Thanks for sharing!

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Gah! That's so coool! Nature's the best!

[Ace D Portgas]

Aww I just love the rhyming scheme in this poem...A good poem I really liked and its always good to see someone's point of view on nature, especially deep ones like these.

Keep it up!