Charcoal Eye's

The greatest story ever told

   Charcoal eye's, pouring grace

       just a traveler, from a foreign place

           just a drifter, worn and weary,

              an honest man, who loved us dearly

                 He took the beating's, he took the pain

                     He fought the Devil, so GOOD would reign

                        

                         Charcoal's eye's, pouring grace

                             just a drifter, from a foreign place

        Sandal straps, and Ginger skin

              sent to save our world from sin!

Reviews

[FreedomFighter]

Strong presentation and nice flow, I enjoyed the read

[mercy party]

i did like this, i liked its form. It made me think of how not so long ago i thought i could fight the devil himself alone. I was very wrong! this poem has a lot of inspirational quality. good!

[Dr. Wood ?]

says it all in a very neat and tidy package

[Chris A Jones]

Love it. Thanks for sharing.

[Lana Huskins]

Wooow! I absolutely love it! :)