Teen Love

Wrote this after being stuck in the hurricane of my friends' relationship problems.

Love can be such a beautiful torture...
As I watch their story play out like another Romeo and Juliet
Fate changes as a dance is carried out
Such a lovely chaos it creates
Misunderstood messages and unspoken truths
Lies hide behind the covers, lust lurks in every shadow
Is anyone ever forgiven
They live by instinct, never logic
Assumed love turns into death
They grow up too fast to understand anything at all
Try too hard to prove their maturity
Words mean nothing, spewing out like a fairy tale rehearsed
Nothing is ever how it seems, not even behind scenes
Hearts get shattered and esteems shrink low
They're too young to ever know the truth
Oh love can be such lovely torture...

Author's Note

tell me what you think :)

Reviews

[Shley De]

Thanks.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i agree ....... amazing write