Did I Ever

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Questions I'll never know the answers to.

Did I ever take
your breath away?
Did I ever cause
Your heart to break?

Did I ever make
you want to stay?
When your heart knew
it to be a mistake?

Did I ever make
you stare into space?
Did I ever make
your tears flow free?

If I did…I’m so, so sorry
To have put you …in that place
But that’s
what you did to me

© 2012 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

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Shimmerbliss/CAF

Those last two lines were rather unexpected and so the impact was all the more resounding. Beautiful, and softly sad.

Posted 13 Years Ago

J.J. NIGHTINGALE

Aww .. Sweet and sad .. so is the game of Love ..

Jazz X

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Thanks JJ, seems we're all in agreement: This poem is sad! Sorry to be so late with replies and than.. read more

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Added on July 27, 2012
Last Updated on July 27, 2012

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David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV

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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..