Senryu For The Senses

Ode to Spring in Senryu form

Savor the rush from
Sweet wine of Springtime…Nature’s
Opiate sublime

Author's Note

Wine, Springtime: Whats not to like? (and it's a quick read!)

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it is an opiate, in its own right.

nicely expressed, David.

[Marie]

I do like springtime...the rain washed air is as sweet as wine, and the rain itself is a soft footed dancer...

[David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)]

Your comment is more poetic than my silly senryu Marie! Those two lines are the first two lines of a very powerful poem. Now finish it before I do!

[Marie]

I may do that, but if you beat me to it, okay...