Live It Or Lose it

Live It Or Lose it

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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Life is made of life and loss

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        Make no mistakes?
Endure no strife?…Then my friend…
You will not live life!

© 2016 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


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David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
It's a Senryu, sad but true

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thats the best senryu I have seen

Posted 9 Years Ago


David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

9 Years Ago

complimentary comments are all the sweeter when they come from the most accomplished poets!
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Tate Morgan

9 Years Ago

You are welcome

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 Added on August 7, 2016
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David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..