Loss

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Just my usual coffee shop rhyming Senryu

The pain is real and

Hurts so bad...How can one miss

What one never had

© 2018 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Author's Note

It's a Senryu

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Chris Shaw

A great deal of feeling in this senryu. And I imagine there are more people who feel like this than you would think. Well written.

Chris

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

Thanks Christine. I appreciate your time reading my little effort and kind words. Helped make my day.. read more

Donna

This is amazing to me! I ask this question all the time. Nice writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thanks much Donna. Sometimes I feel like Senryus and Haikus are a cop-out: so short and spare! Your .. read more

7 Years Ago

You are very welcome! ☺

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Added on June 13, 2018
Last Updated on June 13, 2018

Author

David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV

About

Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..