Birds Of A Feather

Birds Of A Feather

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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Always unexpected!

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Inspiration…like
Love... both fickle things that steal
In ‘pon Angel wings

© 2018 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


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David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
Another Senryu

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I highly enjoyed the connection made between inspiration and love in this poem. "fickle" is a good word to use.
The choice of words going from the second line to the third is unexpected. Am I right in saying these two lines are saying these "fickle things...steal in, upon Angel wings"? It is interesting phrasing.

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David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..