Leave Me Be!!!!!!!!!!

Leave me be!!!!!                                                           
Current mood: exhausted                                                                                        
Category: Writing and Poetry

Tightly cured in the dark so deep
My spirit is shattered
Broken and beat


My emotions have taken over
As I cry then weep


Depression has set in
So very deep


My heart was open
For others to share


But is slowly closing
As know one even cares


I had so much to offer
To the world out there


So I'm afraid
My adventure is over
Know one even cares


Before it began
My heart was so open


But now it is closed
My spirit is broken

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Dear Dawn, we all have days like this but they will get better and there are people who really do care.

[Angel Baby]

I have days like this, happy to know I'm not alone....though I really wouldn't wish this on anyone. A very deep emtional write that pulled me in with the first few lines. Well Done! P.W.