Raven

Its not totaly done yet and i don't give if no one likes it, it was something that just popped into my head c:

.Raven.

Hear the ravens cry,

Before the hour glass dies

dress for your finest hour;

for death holds all the power.

 

 

Death is your mission,

yet life is your obsession.

Speak your words with carefull  Precision.

Reviews

[-Scribe in Style-]

Well written poem.
"Death is your mission,
yet life is your obsession."
Means so much.. Lines are really intense and exact!

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

wicked birds, watch your back lol. Good read again .

[Carter Meyer]

this was a beautiful poem. The rhyme seemed a little forced, but other than that, it was very poignant and I enjoyed it throughly. Definitely a good read.

Always,
Carter