a new creation

even the kindest of honeybees will be crushed under the weight of rubber and cloth.

a man lacking consideration, appreciation; though he has motivation for the adaptiation of our world in his view, when he steps upon that which composes our earth it is our cue.

I know, my friends, that condemnation is not what we’d like to see for our nation and as we yearn for preservation while our knowledge moves towards annihilation we acquire starvation, gain taxation, and yet we do not question our nation. I will do nothing less than scream 'liberation'; yes, the time has come for our salvation.

Reviews

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. the heady mix of political insight and poetic expression is what makes this an outstanding piece of writing for me ... of course, it's also an ode to brevity ... there's a world of meaning here that has been expressed with very few words ... the aspiring poet in me finds great inspiration in your words ... the aspiring nation-builder in my finds great power in your expression of patriotism ... super work, dear poet ... absolutely loved it ...

[persianleopard]

:) A kindred spirit. I like this.

[Day]

thank you all for your kind words. :)

[Distant horizons]

This is wonderfully written. Great flow, almost musical, with the theme of change wonderfully expressed.

Where a deep metaphor, woven into the excellent choice of words, wins some audience. Lovely work!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I stand up and scream Bravo and if my exclamation key worked on this keyboard I would be yelling.....