Missing Someone Special

A story of someone great that I once held. After a long relationship you've only left me with a memory.

Flowing brown
With streaks of blond

Light skin
Freckles like a constellation

Thin lips
Smile like the sun

Something Great
Something I lost Forever

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

Ouch, that last like was a shotgun to the face. I did not see that coming and that's what makes it awesome to me.

[zunie frost]

this is really outstanding how you describe your love to someone who is so special to you in just few words !!!!
good work !!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Great description in so few words. You create missed beauty and a sad ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daydreaming]

Thanks for stopping in and having a read. I appreciate it ^.^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Hogwarts]

This is really good :) beautiful imagery.

[Daydreaming]

Thanks, everyone once in a while she'll run through my head and I tried to explain her in as few words as possible :)

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is beautiful, my friend

[Daydreaming]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

your welcome!!!

[PHFASCES]

I found this interesting.
Reminds me of the features of a lady i used to like.
Brilliant work

[Daydreaming]

Thank you :)

[scarlynn]

This reads so smoothly and is just enough to produce sad and sweet emotions. Great writing.

[Daydreaming]

Thank you!